Comments of chapter undefined of Level Up Legacy

I liked it. he had a glimpse of his subconscious like innocence lost kinda thing that can pull him from a dark mental place. idk if I explained that right or if I made sense

I rather liked the way this chapter turned out. I'm wondering if this kid is the one that told him "Not Yet" and closed the gate on Arthur.

This basically tells us that Arthur is unkillable, and even if he dies. He will find a way to come back. . . I mean if you knew that, what is there to fear? Conflicts in the story become more pointless. Was hoping this Ark would be a life lesson for Arthur but instead he was literally told he created the world, just have fun.

its fine as is

i like this chapter. and "the world he created", huh interesting

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I liked this chapter as is.

I like it.

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