MellowGuy
It's unbearable. Everytime he has something super convenient that the author never mentioned. "oh, then Mc used a letter that he got from someone" "oh, now is 100m because I need it to be, so let me put some random reason here that I've never mentioned before" Why don't you write things as they happen? Instead of telling us something that happened in the story that was important to the plot, the Mc knows, but we were left out. /rantend