Comments of chapter undefined of Level Up Legacy

only 1 status point per lvl? ...

I'm annoyed that he can kill rabbits and snakes for food or experience, but not wolves. That seems a bit arbitrary. Also, how is he a scholar? Scholars study and learn. He's just handed magic power like in a video game. No one mistakenly calls gamers scholars or hands them degrees or diplomas. Very disappointing.

Slow but steady start. One thing I’ve also noticed is your tendency to begin your sentences with ‘He’ or ‘His’. A little bit of advice from me would be to try and spice up your sentence starters a bit since it can feel rather monotone sometimes. There’s also a minor tense mistake after the three stars, where you put ‘has’ instead of ‘had’. Minor things really. The grammar and general style is still way better than most of what I’ve read. Good work with keeping it fairly realistic!

i dont like the fact that 1 level is pretty much nothing, 1 stat point? how sad

Is Mc a Idiot or what. He would kill the other but not a wolf. IQ 1

the heck with only 1 stat a lvl

Thanks for the chapter

The 1 stat point kind of disappointed me

So he gets one point per level and the level up doesnt increase his stats? At least he wont be over powered anytime soon

thanks for the chapter

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I think Arthur should be describing the events

This is where you lost me

FYI, blood turns brown then black when it dries.

so what? Maybe he got soft spot for wolves or injured, u guys gotta problem?

1?!?!?!?!?

i like

Some errors but interesting nonetheless