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Comments of chapter undefined of Level Up Legacy

Speedster
SpeedsterLv11Speedster

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Vladarius
VladariusLv5Vladarius

Arthur wondered if this was what it felt like to have an older brother.* this is the right way, since Arthur in the normal sentence is saying he is the older brother.

LollipoPReapeR
LollipoPReapeRLv5LollipoPReapeR

Seems like a classic set up for a betrayal....

SorcererCat
SorcererCatLv5SorcererCat

Author you should get rid of the word roared and replace it with shouted. The only time someone would roar is if they are very very angry or in the middle of battle and they are trying to scare the enemy or build up moral in before or in the middle of battle. It is almost never going to be the word roared. It will normally be the word shouted.

Readtilltheybleed
ReadtilltheybleedLv10Readtilltheybleed

Mellow Drama

Lannydar
LannydarLv14Lannydar

😀 👍 👍 Thanks for the Work

VanshRaj
VanshRajLv4VanshRaj

thanks for the chapter

Jebat
JebatLv7Jebat

Thanks

That_1_Dude
That_1_DudeLv13That_1_Dude

author, you clearly have writing skills, as well as intelligence to write a comprehensive story, so why is it that you're neglecting world-building/setting? its as if you're allowing the readers to just make their own theories and guesses as to how the world is set up and operates and what world it is at that?

Juwade
JuwadeLv13Juwade

There are *** on page 5. It's causing a bit of confusion

AppleyGod
AppleyGodLv10AppleyGod

completely useless timeskip that actually takes away from the story

Leandro_Sepulveda_2456
Leandro_Sepulveda_2456Lv1Leandro_Sepulveda_2456

i see more problems :P

Niloysom_Das
Niloysom_DasLv5Niloysom_Das

Good!

Sivan7moon
Sivan7moonLv4Sivan7moon

Naisuu time skip right there~

Lancorian
LancorianLv11Lancorian

nice story

kaban
kabanLv14kaban

so far so good!

MistofOblivion
MistofOblivionLv7MistofOblivion

thanks for the chapter 💖 ,this feels a little more realistic than other novels of same genre

ABHI_9013
ABHI_9013Lv13ABHI_9013

Thanks for the chapter

EMIN3M
EMIN3MLv14EMIN3M

xp

MaxFantasy
MaxFantasyLv1MaxFantasy

At first it's a bit repetitive, but then it surprises you with a couple of things, although the protagonist is not entirely to my liking, it's an entertaining work. 3 nice SMILE.