Comments of chapter undefined of Level Up Legacy

I have read novels similar to yours, but they were very flawed and lacked character depth, unrealistic, yours is way better, based on chapter 1, I rate it 5/5

Even though the introduction is good, it would be even better if you can give us a bit more information regarding the world background. I think you are planning to tell us more about the world as the story progresses which is good but with a little more intro about the world, we can imagine it better. Also try to describe things a bit more like what does the dungeon look like but keep it to a minimum and not to verbose. These are just my suggestions as a new reader of your novel.

Whilst the intro was a bit of a cliche, it’s done neatly. No world out to get him, no people treating like him shit just because. It’s nice.

Keep up with your good work author 👍😊

this is going amazing so far. imma keep reading. wish you the best of luck

Nice

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter 💖

That felt like Solo Leveling. Maybe that's author's inspiration. Well this is my second novel on web novel and you got me stuck. Amazing Chapter, guess I won't frown on loss of my fast passes. Good work author

this reads so much like solo leveling. Well done to the author for this I'm hooked.

new with old thing

... *Notice*

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

A well written introduction. Seems good so far.

looks interesting

interesting

Wow dapat novel yang lumayan bagus

Awesome book keep I hope you can make hard copies, but keep up the good work author's.

Amazing first chap! Been going through different novels and this first chap alone gives me a lot of hope that your novel will be a great one 👍🏻 I appreciate how well you described everything without giving too much and gave a sense of urgency to the mc’s development - thank you!

Nice intro. Let's see how the book develops.