TheAdventurer
Sometimes it is difficult to tell who is speaking. "What about it?" "Are you interested yet?" Normally, this would indicate a change in speaker, but I am inferring from context clues that it is the same person. This is the beginning of the book, so I am expecting this trend to continue, as it would be a monstrous task to reword the entire book. I'll do what I can to adapt, but it will bring me out of some moments.