Comments of chapter undefined of HPRP (New Chapters in fanfic section version)

It would be contrary to what you created to add her in the relationship, I mean you made him see his true desire in the Mirror of Erised and she wasn't included, she never was mentionned as a crush of his, and right now they are having the perfect love story so why had her. But if you thinks it's possible to make it seem logic and want to go with it why not but it's risky. Anyway good work, keep at it I love this story

In my opinion adding another love interest won't end well in this story, I've dropped so many stories because they destroyed the plot, or the feeling the story gives, with an harem and I really like this one as it already is...

yes tonks in the harem

amelia + sirius fck yeah also make em have twins a girl that takes after her mother and a boy that takes after his father (sirius won't be able to escape happiness) my opinion on tonks is a no due to a great love between aedan and Victoria and adding tonks now would feel a little unnatural and forced because she was not mentioned enough for a proper builtup to it

Nice chapter, and nice dramatic flare near the end. Also it’s your story bud, do what you want with his relationship wether it’s 1 girl or 2. Don’t sweat the small stuff just do what feels right for you. 😁

Im really into a harem story but really, a lot of story kind of self destruct after that. So im not really sure. If you think you can write it believable and also making it interesting, then go for it. Tonks is really a fun character to include into the story more.

ASIDE FROM LUPIN DO NOT ADD HER TO THE R/S LEAVE THE COUPLE ALONE GOD DAMN IT

Just add her to the relationship with Aedan and in the end if you dont decide to integrate her with the mc then please dont have her be in a relationship with Lupin at least, though i am more favorable to the first option

I would personally like Tonks in the relationship, but only if you’re confident you can make it work.

Really it's up to you and it's your story. Don't deviate from your plan just because of the reader, that can kill the story. Flip a coin. If you like the outcome, do it. If you don't like the outcome, do the opposite. The concern about adding another person to a relationship is a valid one, especially with the emotions and dynamic, but personally I think that is one of your strengths. So I'm less worried about it.

Was the MC using hyperbole when he told the dementor to die? Because dementors are unkillable in canon. If he did really kill it, then everyone including the ministry should be freaking out and trying to figure out how he did it.

So long as the twins, Sirius, Tonks and Lupin survive the attack on Hogwarts then we cool but if you can leave Tonks and Lupin together. Thanks for the chapter.

Most stories get ruined by multiple love interest. It’s hard enough making good story with one romance, adding more removes from the Main story to add to the extra romance or makes the romances fall flat since they can’t get enough focus. Just hope you don’t ruin the story wanting to achieve some kind of harem dream.

Add tonks hehehe

Grest story

If you really want to use tonks more there are ways other than the harem route to reintroduce her...

Ad Tonks, but make it work. (For example let Tory discover her bisexuality or make Aden have a split personality.)

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

Xp

P.S. At the very least a love triangle. Aeden's interpersonal relationships are all so smooth and solid, and the MC is so unflappable. Adding Nymphadora in contention for his emotions would get him in a scenario we haven't seen him in. His heart pulling him different directions can add drama without feeling like an asspull ala him getting captured and bound despite the immense physical and sensory advantages he has.