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Comments of chapter undefined of HPRP (New Chapters in fanfic section version)

edoardoabbondio
edoardoabbondioLv10edoardoabbondio

Oh god she is so fucking arrogant and nosy, like please can she avoid demanding everything as if it’s her birth right, I really hope she isn’t the romantic interest

JaimeX07
JaimeX07Lv6JaimeX07

can we move on from Victoria already i been 5 chapters that I can't stomatch already

ElG0hary
ElG0haryLv5ElG0hary

did MC forget his wish to have ability to talk to animals????? or did he forget that death told him not to make big change to the world?

Henry_Morgan_2728
Henry_Morgan_2728Lv1Henry_Morgan_2728

You might need to go back and add a few chapters on how he befriends the goblins, at this point his relationship with them feels unearned.

Kurumi21
Kurumi21Lv6Kurumi21

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

daoistxuanlong
daoistxuanlongLv13daoistxuanlong

Need I remind you that cds came out in the early 90ts and only cassette tape was available in the late 80ts and cd players didn’t become portable till the min and late 90ts

daoistxuanlong
daoistxuanlongLv13daoistxuanlong

muggle things are beneath us' mentality and 'muggle tech doesn't work near magic' Why so heavy on the muggle hate from what I have seen and read there are many many wizards like Arthur Weasley trying to make muggle tech work and obviously muggle borne wizards would also do so considering how much magic they give off it would ruin devices around them especially when they cast spells plus dong forget about the night bus and other things that are a mix of magic and tech in my opinion it’s just bloody hard not a matter of prejudice

MikaelDragonsoul
MikaelDragonsoulLv15MikaelDragonsoul

Thanks for the chapter

Damanger
DamangerLv5Damanger

Title of this chapter was really out of content.... especially Hogwarts part.... Half a year to entry of HP

Narcox
NarcoxLv13Narcox

thanks for the chapter

shenzbnfuf
shenzbnfufLv10shenzbnfuf

Thanks for the chapter

OldSinner
OldSinnerLv6OldSinner

Good ch.