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This could use some proofreading....
Hmm
so cute
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good
hihi
I didn't ever something like this. spaceship and another planet it's really different from my comfort zone. But you story line is really good. keep up with your good work.
Lot of errors, but I can overlook them. A fairly average start. Could use something that excites the reader more.