Comments of chapter undefined of The Strategist That Succeed With Gallant Power

I gotta say, this could really use some proofreading

Needs some serious editing. So many grammatical errors in numerous sentences.

I have to read twice or thrice before I can decipher the context behind some paragraphs. If this can be edited well, it will really result to an impressive descriptive narration of what's happening. Please take time to edit this.

Keeep up the hard work author

really, senpai, i have to learn from your descriptive sentences! so brilliant! 🐶

I love your descriptions. It's realistic and allows the readers to clearly imagine what is going on!

the point of view or narration is sometimes erratic

Your descriptive ideas are really nice

Nice chapterr amazing

More more!

Japaniz *cough* energy-efficient beam

You're really good in describing each scene. Great job.

I have to give up on this now, it’s too confusing and I don’t have the time now to slowly read but I’ll try later

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