ArkAnghel
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That’s some great world building.
it is very imaginative, I give you that. I could picture it although the flow of reading could be improve.
Execute order 66:
author could you stop using would?!... (WOULD:used to talk about a possible situation that has not happened).
Well constructive and defined
Perhaps its because I'm new to war & military novels that I find this quite hard to comprehend
i agree
It is great I really like it☺
I think there's a lot going on, but I love it! It keeps my attention.
Hey, gr8 descriptions
Another cryptic chapter . Fk it . Dropped .
A lot of stuff happening but very exciting!!! Your description is very good.
Wow such a good description!!! It felt like I am watching some war related animes😍😍 coz I am a die hard fan of animes too😂😂 Will surely follow up the remaining ones🙌
Very good description of the scene going on. It's creates a very good image for the reader
Loving it even more, just more tense work needs to be do as you have past and present in the same sentences
atrocious grammar😂 Are u a native french speaker ? that would explain why your syntax is so "peculiar"
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