Chad_Farmer
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You really need to work on the grammar of this novel, I saw more than 10 grammar mistakes in this chapter alone. I also have to mention that some sentences didn't feel fluid.
thanks for the chapter.
good
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Thanks for the chap
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Interesting.
is this fanfiction???
Although there are definetly some major grammatical errors here and there it has a promising start so I'm looking forway to reading the story author!
Your formatting is messed up