Comments of chapter undefined of To the Depth of Abyss

You really need to work on the grammar of this novel, I saw more than 10 grammar mistakes in this chapter alone. I also have to mention that some sentences didn't feel fluid.

thanks for the chapter.

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good

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you have potential

Thanks for the chap

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Interesting.

is this fanfiction???

Although there are definetly some major grammatical errors here and there it has a promising start so I'm looking forway to reading the story author!

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