Comments of chapter undefined of Quick Transmigration: Goddess Of My Imagination

I think the grammar is mostly alright. Even if there are mistakes, it's not really bothering me. It's more the wording (and sometimes the structuring of sentences) that's a bit clunky sometimes. 😄 Good chappy though

I didn't notice anything out of place. Grammar looks fine to me.

the grammar is ok. And great chapter.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Your use of grammar has improved so much since the first chapters! It's easy to tell how much work you put into this story. Like others have said now it is mostly your sentence structure and the correct use of pronouns that you'll need to watch out for. This story is so much fun. Thank you!

To be honest, while all of your intention is comprehensible and your phrasing is legible, the chapter could do with "some polish around the edges." That stated, if you hired an editor it would be a simple patch for them. And as luck would have it, I happen to actually be an editor for hire and could fit your story into my daily schedule if you would be so inclined. Please reply here if you would like to hire my services or you have any questions in this regard.

thanks😘