Comments of chapter undefined of Tales of the Dragon Mortal

Not a bad start, but the writing does have some issues with clarity. 10/10 so far anyway.

Nothing beats harder than a shield, especially something as rare as Dragon Magic lel.

I think in the second paragraph you said lira had a muscular leg do you mean legs or does he have on humongous leg he uses as a pogo stick?

Lol

this novel is amazing

this was very interesting

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Theprobkiller

Who in the hell is the mc?!

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Hey, the author speaks here. I've opened up a giveaway for this first-time event. Gift: 50$ worth of gift card/paid stone, you pick it whether your preference is. How to get it? 1. Buy the privelidge (you can use the free gems that you can claim it every TGIF event!) 2. join discord server: https://discord.gg/WPMPy8q 3. share your screenshot on the general, tag Hartpeler on it. 4. wait till magic comes to you where you won it ;3 Winner will be announced every 30 as long as the privilege event is still there (remember what I said? we might manage to get hefty amount of coins if we made this big) Why I did this? Simple, we want made this book big! I'm alone is impossible to do it, so I need every fellow DMT soldier for help!

nice chap

Wait what? Lira has other woman? Oh my O.O

Is he two timing Kiana? Lmao.