Comments of chapter undefined of Systems Collides

Really liking it so far, hope you'll keep going after the first 10 chapters, too many stop updating after a few haters who just hate to hate start saying they don't like the story. Only things i found were a few punctuation or S's missing here and there but nothing major that would change the enjoyment from reading it.

Hhmm i wonder what his reaction will be so pls come up with the next chapters soon.

I laughed Good start to the story

I like this. More of this!

Really making the girl a dude I mean come on

Thanks for the chapter!