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Comments of chapter undefined of Avatar : The Legend of Phoenix

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Victor_Hayes
Victor_HayesLv10Victor_Hayes

Chapter redeemed :) I honestly started reading your Thor fic before this TLA fic so I don't mind if you switch priorities in writing. Looking forward for more!

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AscheCWPM
AscheCWPMLv5AscheCWPM

Nicely done with the drama and action in this chapter! Though RIP to my boy Sokka, but I feel that his death will be great character development for Katara

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Tilted19
Tilted19Lv4Tilted19

It was a good mix of drama, action and forwarding the plot. Nothing peculiarly felt rushed.

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Lazy_writer
Lazy_writerLv3Lazy_writer

good progress, not very fast and not very slow, straight to the point, and well written 10/10 [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Dogramagra
DogramagraLv13Dogramagra

top quality work.. and KATARA GET!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA

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8buddha
8buddhaLv48buddha

turtles are cool but mixing them with lions makes them awesome, turtle-snakes are creepy

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skulputulurubug
skulputulurubugLv13skulputulurubug

Well this novel had no room for Sokka Zuko will take all the baes

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DimensionalFish
DimensionalFishLv14DimensionalFish

Author no comments it was just great

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Crimson_King
Crimson_KingLv6Crimson_King

What youre going to be leaving this story to focus on others? đŸ„șPlease dont, this is one of my favorite stories and my All time favorite Avatar story tied with Anvil and the Wild flower. I really hope the chapter releases dont slow down too harshly.

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jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5jeanpierregerardo

interesting from the beginning until the end of the chapter, it began with the appearance of the turtle, after suko in search of katara, then to relate from katara's point of view of how brutal someone with more power and ambition can be, also the effect that the story had, where he charged the death of "sokka", I think several became fond of his stupidities xD, but I think his death would not be in vain, since with his sacrifice, he made katara face the harsh reality of what happens if you are not strong enough, you end up dead if you are a man (slave or among other dirty things if you are a woman, if you are a child as a training slave, among other things), and finally seeing Zuko take the "boomerangg" from the Zokka died to rescue Katara and in passing clean up with the bandits (not to mention the appearance of "TaTa", continuing with the liberation of all those captured, and finally with Zuko gaining the respect of the people). - It was a chapter of many negative emotions and in the end positive (for being free), now I hope it continues with the other water tribe (the spirits and the white-haired girl who lives thanks to the spirits). - I would keep putting more will, but I better go to breakfast xD. -Good chapter.

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FAP_Master_
FAP_Master_Lv6FAP_Master_

ty....next

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Crimson_King
Crimson_KingLv6Crimson_King

Seems you took the advice from a comment to divide the pov changes. Well done author, you have just gained more of my respect. Its a pleasure seeing you improve as the chapters go on.

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Phoenix1998
Phoenix1998Lv6Phoenix1998

Sokka is dead

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Jhonathan_Carrasco
Jhonathan_CarrascoLv4Jhonathan_Carrasco

keep it up I love this story please.

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nick_maynard
nick_maynardLv13nick_maynard

👏😊

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LordMirror
LordMirrorLv4LordMirror

Having Zuko meet Tata and Katara at a same time, made Taka look like nuisance for me. Would Aang even fight against Zuko? Now that original trio was separated. đŸ€”

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Lucas_Oliveira_2302
Lucas_Oliveira_2302Lv1Lucas_Oliveira_2302

I think Katara will be mad when she finds her father because he abandoned her, maybe even kill him in a fit of rage

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LordValmar
LordValmarLv4LordValmar

Great chapter. Genuinely wasn't expecting to see a main cast killed off that way. Its a good way to showcase how dangerous the world can be - something that tends to be glossed over in the kids show.

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WorldMonarch
WorldMonarchLv14WorldMonarch

thanks for the chapter

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Sekz
SekzLv5Sekz

I love your story, great job

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darkwolfyukio
darkwolfyukioLv3darkwolfyukio

I like it, keep going.