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duuuuuuuuuuuuuudee you neeeed improvement. sorry i cant list it down but....the prologue is goooood.

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GJ4271
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Awesome bro

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Sanyam_Raj
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Amazing concept I can't wait fo ch 2

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sadgoose
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it great srsly

Coby_lion
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Awesome one

Demon_King000
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👍👍

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TRYSYCKL3
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needs a little work on the text

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Sankalp_Verma
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Thanks for your kind words

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Zoro_The_Dark
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TacoKun
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Good First Chapter.

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Zoro_The_Dark
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Wait. . . Is this (Darby) a JoJo's reference?? ?

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DaoistMR8BWy
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so, the prologue is all about waking up to go to school.. I need to dig in more deeper.. more moree...

Super_Star_8150
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nice

Super_Star_8150
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awesome

Super_Star_8150
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Amazing

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TRYSYCKL3
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but still good