If there were grammatical errors, I did not notice them, because the plot has untolded so quickly and effectively. The momentum has me intrigued enough to want to learm more.
Don't judge yourself to harshly, your grammar is better than most American amateur writers... Honestly as an American I am truly inspired. I struggled just to hold the conversation in a second language let alone write a book!
Wow! We're getting married is his plan! Makes sense then the rumors can be founded to be true she will be protected and then they can fall in love! like it!