DamnPlotArmor
Honestly not really into the whole mind break thing honestly like the slave i get it. But your just making her into a literally bot I hope all his *** partners arent just going to be lifeless cause thats boring. Who wants a mindless idiot that can only do what there told following them around. I its probably just me cause I like when characters actually still have there personalitys, oh well so far so good everything else is appealing.