DamnPlotArmor
close to dropping this... dude, protagonist characters are usually powerful and these random characters have the guts to rob somoene even if he was a"slave" in a ptoganist's shop? completely unreasonable... I mean look at those novels with mc and their shops. no one usually provokes the owner by causing trouble in their shops. if this place is that lawless then the owner of the shop should've already died and his business taken away. imma try for a few chaps and see if its worth it.
The initial fight with the guards outside the gates was well handled. Them attempting to rob an unknown slave was a bit of a stretch but not too much to trigger disbelief. But this guys' reaction is perplexing. UFC fighters aren't cold blooded killers, most people don't smile in situations where a simple mistake could lead to there death. I really hope I don't see something like this again. Otherwise I'll have a drop it...