Comments of chapter undefined of A New World, an immersive game experience

For losing votes, I would guess to say that there needs to be more action in the chapters sometimes. There are tons of chapters where there is just constant dialog for 10-15 chapters and nothing is really happening aside from character building. I completely love it, but from a casual reading standpoint it doesn’t hold to some of the other books that are just non stop action. I would also say you’re releasing your chapters at the wrong time. Most readers probably vote on the first book they open every day. If your book is updated right at the change where everyone is getting their power stones then you could gain a large amount of votes that way as well. This is just my opinion, hope it helps a bit!