Comments of chapter undefined of A New World, an immersive game experience

Fall asleep wake up, fall asleep wake up all in one night now that would be confusing. I would never know what day it was.

Aha! This is what the emotional stress will come from! This will surely cause irritability, etc...

thanks for the chapter 💖

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Im liking this already

would have liked to have a little more information on the city which he could have already known since the more detailed information seems to be coming with the tour. the information i would like to have known are aesthetics of houses,very basic but important. are the roads paved or full of escramemts (due to lack of sewers?). what is the center piece of th city, is it a castle the temple, a big tree or the world three( which is most likely since it is birthplace of high elves (mc)) if the city is able to view the world tree or is in its shadow on part of the day. aproximation on the size of the city. hope this constructive criticism helps improving your writing (although i know writing is far harder then critisizing) and keep up the good work, so far your novel is better then a majority of the other novels on this cite/apo

what is the time difference... like loging off will start his normal day and if he can't log on until 8pm the next evening... I guess how can he be sure to be on-time for training and the city tour

How long until he realizes that it isn't a game?

good novel good written

I like the concept 💡 this world is built 👌 on. (very good 👍)

thx for the chapter

Some spelling errors/now instead of know, but it has been a very enjoyable read so far, Keep it up! 😁

I'm lost! Is he in a Elf kingdom?

Sigh... another cliche... I hope he doesn't end up with the girl... admiring a beautiful girl is fine but there is no reason to stare so openly and brush it off as innocence... cliche

How do people quote comments in their reply? I don't see how to do it on my phone.

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