Comments of chapter undefined of The World Flipped

Thanks for the chap

I can barely tell what I'm reading on this chapter and I also find this chapter quite racist. please no racism it kills a lot of decent books.

Thank you very much, firstly i don't have an editor. But I also have plans to edit myself if I don't get an editor. I really love your opinions and will work on your corrections please do well to tell me more of this corrections. Also the concept of 7 billion let's just say there was a population control or something. I gave a lot of thought into making the novel but i can't disagree i missed some things. This is my first work pardon my inexperience I'll get better

While there are some racist leanings in the chapter, so far it wasn't from the MC (who had too much else going on personally). Not sure if the surrounding characters are going be full time or just partial intros for later. But gives a taste of the secondary of the secondary characters for later development.

ohh the f1ct xithe some gost hosting does Authoe want to tale example on Omniscient Reader Pov novel

Honest Opinion? Use at least an automated grammar checker like Grammerly or LanguageTool if you aren't good in English yourself. Alternatively (or additionally), get editors.