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Also, if he literally has Captain America levels of Strength, durability and speed nobody but the Night King should be able to match him. And even then I'm not sure since the Strength of Captain America fluxuates a lot between stories, but at the very least he can lift like, a literal tonne ... Add that to prodiguous skill with any weapon? Yeah no, sounds like you're planning to either nerf the MC or write some bs shenanigans to give him a rival.
To the Author's note: Well, He's got Cap's strength, which actually grows a bit as time goes on (also with his enhanced healing he'll live quite a while). Considering he's not just relying on his cheat abilities to be strong and is actively training should actually help this along. Captain America would easily handle multiple opponents at once for sure, but you're correct. he's not a one man army. The man did however keep a helicopter from flying off with just his arm strength though.. just a side note I guess lol
He doesn't want to be king because it will be troublesome but it won't matter because people will always harass his family due to their wealth. If he was king he would have some protection from that. A powerful ruler will not let a family become too influential because it may become a threat to the throne.
i like your story and by no mean i am critizing right now,but it really depends on what version of the super serum you are basing on, what i mean is for example, the ultimate universe captain america in his prime is a mountain level being,in medieval times he would be an army destroyer,again no attack meant just showing that captain is really strong,people often forget that because of hulk and thor, but both of them in comics can easily reach planetary level in most versions,not counting thinks like planet hulk etc etc
That's a really bad excuse to not be able to control some things. They're still animals, even if they're familiars. And if so Dragons shouldn't be able to be controlled by a horn. I could MAYBE see him not being able to control warged creatures like the direwolves of the Starks or that shadowcat of that one crazy dude.
Mc is stupid, obviously he is not fit to be a noble. Do you think that because you're not the king, your kids won't fight to be the next lord mormont ? Loo at the real world, brother fight to get the money of their father, wake up. As long as there is power, there will be people to fight for it, even if they are a "family". The fact tht he is not able to see is proof of the impossibility to ever be someone of importance. What about your children, do you think they won't do war to be king i the end ?If you have too much power and don't accept the position which chould come with it, you will be seen as an issue by every person of power.
I honestly liked the idea of Sansa as a wife, sure at the start she isn’t a genius, or a godly character heck she isn’t even a proper person for always bullying her sister by calling her ugly and a superficial person by wanting Jeffory just because of his title. But after experiencing hardships she does grow and learn to become something more. The Mc has that opportunity to give her something like that. In fact this chapter disappointed me because I praised you for your realism but this chapter with Sansa didn’t have that. She’s a naive girl, so obviously when ron saved her she would have been fawning over him like a naive person. Not to forget about their dates and stuff. Now she thinks there’s something wrong with him because he doesn’t touch her like he’s supposed to? How would she even know about that in the first place? Also the MC should tell her, “hey, I feel we should take things to the next level when you are about 16 at least. If you have kids it can be dangerous for you if you are younger than 16... “ He’s modern man, sure 11 is way to young I agree 16 should be pretty normal for kids nowadays to have intercourse. It doesn’t matter if it’s correct or not it just happens, ask around and you will know that 16 is already a conservative estimate. You talk about how he’s not strong? His house is becoming wealthier and wealthier, sure he can’t defeat a army, but his army can? Modern military training, advance steel work tecniques, cement fortifications, ballistas, trebuchet , arcuballista for archers with rapid fire. Spear walls soldiers, horse archers with stirrups for moment and holding ... etc So much technology that he could have brought over in 4 years when he was a lord and even more before he became a lord! What did he do with his time? Sure his dad was the lord but does that mean he couldn’t do anything else? Secretly build workshops and stuff? You haven’t even mention the glassworks... I like your writing style, and I like the story, it has so much potential to be honest. I’m just giving my opinion here don’t take it to heart or anything.
I have a feeling that you You do not want to see Sansa as a wife (if you exclude her from possible wives, I hope she does not cheat on him, or she is not killed just like that (it would be better if the Starks broke off the engagement, I Don't like Sansa, but I wanted to, so that they would be all right, even if they were with Sansa (I don't like it when there is a drama with the main character). I hope he wins everyone (I think he has the strength)
What is this weird thing with him deffending Daenarys and thinking about actively going after her to make her queen? Is the mc not informed about the actual story or what? If the intention was to marry her then maybe, posible, perhaps he could manage to ctrol her more destructive impulses and she would be a descent ruler. But just helping her and letting her rule, she would just follow the same crazy path she originally did, maybe it would take longer, but she would still end there. Again, what is the mc even thinking with this "she was justified in her actions"? Against the lanisters, and other nobles, okay, she wanted to avenger her crazy family that was ruining everyones life, cool. Against the thousands of inocents that she murdered for the lools of it? no.