Comments of chapter undefined of Against Heaven's Will
Against Heaven's Will
Piokilek
Chapter comments14
No offense but your writing in more problems then there needs to be. Like lets be honest here. All these new problems and issues popping up isn't really exciting anymore especially with how long we have to wait for new chapters. Like I was so excited when you announced this book but it feels like you had no plan for this book or how it would go and are writing on the fly for each chapter. There's things that happened way to fast and even make me wish that you would go back and rewrite the chapters to make them feel more cohesive and fit with the previous book more. Like it's literally one new problem after another never truly solving the first problem without causing massive destruction or death it seems. Like I loved the series but rereading it I can see alot of things now that don't fit right or are even resolved.
