Comments of chapter undefined of Child of Two Bloods

Interesting start 👌👍👍☺😁

interesting start

coop

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I like how the chapter went! A slow introduction of the world while making sure the characters and scenes are not out of place.

Damn. I'm amazed...keep up the good work👍🔥

For a fantasy novel, the first impression characters are amazing! I got a good sense of relief after seeing the mom completing her wish. Good stuff author!

great

Splinters

This first chapter proves to be a very nice starting point into the world this story's taking place in! I found the first half to be really intriguing, and the second half's exposition about the world is really nice. Surely, a nice introduction chapter and would love to see more of it! Keep on doing you!

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