Comments of chapter undefined of Essential NPC with a Chicken

Author, just giving a voice on complaint and a note on dialogue grammar. Everything is good except for one recurring grammatical issue that is starting to bug me. It how you end some of your dialogues. You have a tendency to end dialogue sentences like this: "Noted." He said. When it should be like this: "Noted," he said. Even if it was shouted, it should still be like this: "Noted!" he shouted. Unless you use a name, in which case it doesn't matter. "NOTED!" Heman bellowed. Also on a side note, try to avoid using 'voiced out' instead of 'said' too often. 'Voiced out' is very, very rarely used in normal English literature and accentuates the possibility that either English is not your first language, or that you've read more webnovels than good English literature of a high standard. This is a phrase translators tend to use more. Mild complaints aside, your story is very good so far. You've made me laugh a lot. I'm enjoying it. I hope to see more personality from Lavanuk soon because chickens can be good friends too. By the way, when is Bob going to feed Lavanuk? Chickens need to eat too.

thanks for the chapter! 😊

I am here

Haiya, Uncle Roger is really disappointed.

so.. the mother is still dead? i read something wrong then... fk you author

eh? what? how? flag?

Yes, Uncle Roger would be sat at that rice.

uncle roger is dissapointed HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA

Thx for the chap