Comments of chapter undefined of Beasts: Reborn

I honestly don't know how you can improve it I think if you can continue this momentum and pace with the odd break chapter then it will be a amazing novel 👍

This way was good but if thE battlLe iss extremely brutal you might want to extend it Idk if it helps lol pretty much telling you to do both

Nice, hope he uses this as a maturing point to stop thinking about the pointless stuff!