Comments of chapter undefined of The Rise Of A Porter

Ok. This guys an idiot. Its a hunch but im willing to risk everything because of it.

I’m fine with revenge, they kinda deserved it after all they’ve done. But the reasoning is a bit weak. The dialogues didn’t convey the anger for the dead family. For a war of this scale, if it’ll be as big as I imagined, might need more reasoning and build up. It’s too short. Doesn’t need more people or scenes. Just lengthen the discussion in the room. Building up emotions, find more proof and justification for the war.

Author, what happens if an automaton used a transformation rune thing, would it suddenly have blood and stuff? What about its brain? Can it use blood magic Now?

Why not have him create a couple of mask with the transformation ability to allow for stealth missions

Me: Ìts time for war mwahahahaha!!!!!!..assemble the army of authomata!!!!!.... Mc: but ther is none......... Me: nooooooo!!!!!!🥺🥺😭😭😭

i have a hunch... good ill risk my whole family because of it... the black family are idiots... no wonder they like the MC...

Also, it feels like the content of this chapter needs to be a bit more fleshed out. It felt like i was just taking a quick glance at what should’ve been lengthier.

This is a random question but how did you come up with your web novel name?

Thank you for the chapter 🙏 Poll! I totally see Talos getting a transformation ability to blend in as more human or even mimic Arnold! Or go transformator route of becoming a motorcycle. Totally not weird, lol. Why not have his frist golem Duke as a mock human for better protection of his vamp sis! Or go giant golem for when the big fight matters! Oh, turn into the boss he took the syth from. Omg that be cool. It would make going out to formal events look casual. Or just having a siblings day out with the two or three humaniod summons. Or just a epic future battles. Tehehe.

Thanks for the chap!

What was the point of asking who was guarding outside the guild? And how does that connect to Seville?

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Fufufufu... MC finna growing balls huh..?! Dang! I would never have pegged the MC to have such audacity when I was just starting off with this novel. Hell yeah! Things are finally starting to get interesting..

its a waaaaarrrrrrr!!!!!! yeah!

Thanks for a great chapter.

Seville the imposter got caught!!!

👍👍👍👍

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Thank

This is just way too stupid