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Comments of chapter undefined of The Rise Of A Porter

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The Rise Of A Porter

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zouave
zouaveLv11zouave

The pace and process of things progress needs to be worked on more. The way things are changing and being done feels really abrupt. The story is decent so far.

3yr
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Graal_Otonami
Graal_OtonamiLv13Graal_Otonami

I'm glad I'm not the only one who sees issues in the pacing. I know this was written a year ago, so I have to ask: Does it improve, or does the story still have abrupt shifts in emotion, pacing and tone?

2yr
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Modern_Monarch
Modern_MonarchLv11Modern_Monarch

Oh crap, just thought of something. Wouldn’t it be messed up if Alice knew what was happening and was playing him?

3yr
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Xavierwolf
XavierwolfLv14Xavierwolf

My actual last name is Black, really cool to see it in a story like this haha

3yr
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pizzq
pizzqLv4pizzq

He has such useful skill that can see future and he won't even use it? Dude come on...

3yr
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princehi735
princehi735Lv2princehi735

Hey hey hey the title is pretty good

3yr
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SleepWalkingMan
SleepWalkingManLv4SleepWalkingMan

isn't the black family guy is a little too good , I mean he just met Arnold and even if he has rare ice and summoner element , he' s helping him too much, cause it's the first time they met each other.? no.

3yr
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Akabane
AkabaneLv6Akabane

Tbh I like the Black family more then the Sh!t Guild

3yr
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Wolfeon
WolfeonLv3Wolfeon

Finally out of s.hity guild

3yr
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FinalSlasher
FinalSlasherLv11FinalSlasher

John (Miller) Black is cool. But, I still like Lor D. Bob more at the moment. Lor D. Bob came back to life after being killed. That is a pretty massive flex

3yr
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LJ_Valiente
LJ_ValienteLv10LJ_Valiente

Good riddance!

3yr
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Wailer
WailerLv5Wailer

The turn of events here is kinda off....he should have left that guild long time ago not when some of his team members gained his trust like Alice and El

3yr
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D4rk_Fl4me
D4rk_Fl4meLv5D4rk_Fl4me

Thanks for the chapter!

3yr
2
Paragon_Yun
Paragon_YunLv14Paragon_Yun

OMG FINALLY!!! It's about time you wake up!!!

1yr
1
BingeReader01
BingeReader01Lv14BingeReader01

So he trusted them? I thought he just had no choice but to rely on them at the time...

3yr
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nijineko
nijinekoLv10nijineko

I was kinda hoping he'd get powers related to being a porter, actually. rather than a builder type.

3yr
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chickenoverlord
chickenoverlordLv4chickenoverlord

a fine way to quit without the MC to seem a little opportunist and yeah indeed when he was a porter he was in hell there I know

3yr
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Mike_Collins_7853
Mike_Collins_7853Lv3Mike_Collins_7853

notice how Johnny black abilities sound alot like Sirius black abilities from Harry Potter wonder if their relatives

1mth
DeepChiken
DeepChikenLv13DeepChiken

Your part of the family all of a sudden I guess

11mth
Ashanga_Conrad
Ashanga_ConradLv4Ashanga_Conrad

it's my first time reading a webnovel where the MC has such a low IQ. so I'm kind of curious how the author is going to develop this character

1yr
DanteDHero
DanteDHeroLv4DanteDHero

This chapter madeira me think of the line "Welcome to the family son" from Resident Evil VII Biohazard.

2yr
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