Comments of chapter undefined of Second Life's Revenge

a little annoying how the girls can move back and forth of their whereabouts esp. Tine without the knowledge of his father. given that he is busy but if you really love your daughter you will know what is happening to her and never neglect the changes she is just 15. In this era 15 still consider a child that is why adults rule over them, not the other way around. Yes Tine is a 2 way evil **** but if the father really cares for his daughter she will never be like that in the first place.

Great story! I have really enjoyed reading it!

good chapter but feel sorry for the guy, his father don't lo e him

wow the plot is thickening

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love this story

I'm enjoying this story. Hope you will to.

nice plot love the story

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OK OK ya

is Louis already mentioned before?