Comments of chapter undefined of Thrown Into A New World: Let The Punishment Begin!

Better written this time for sure! Though maybe it was just an issue with him observing the MC in a way that was so unbelievable, and other POVs work as long as she’s not around? But the short snippets we get when it’s mainly her POV weren’t that weird/unnatural sounding... Well, glad to see improvements in the writing of other POVs’ dialogue/thought processes either way.✨

ooh~ a mystery! Now I'm sure she was sent there intentionally! Hmm...I wonder why

My bad! So her hair is violet. But Frit was mistaken 😅😅