Comments of chapter undefined of Star Wars: The Last Je'daii

With the way you write you should just delete System and make it Je'dii learner or something akin to that. Maybe Force Journey? Well, I am also not good with book titels. xD

Star force Inheritance? Balance of the Force initiative? honestly just take random words that have a connection to the story and put it through thesaurus .

Well, it's not very interesting to read, chapters are just a prologue and endless dramas "oh I'm alone, my family doesn't have what to do I'm so lonely" and everything like that is just terrible and disgusting, he doesn't look like he's been through all these things which you described, I don’t see the character’s life at all, except for some mobs

thanks for giving us, even though not that long a good few chapters. Hope everything works it self out on your side and that you maybe one day will come back and finish the great novel of yours

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thx for the chap

Bro I somewhat don't want you to kill maul but at least if your gonna do it make it so MC gets something in return like mauls memories or something

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter ^_^