Beelieveinyourself
There was one big plot hole about how the grandfather knew how to make dresses, also it said that the queen also made dresses and my question is why do royalty know how to sew dresses. Also the dress was finished in knee day? In real life it takes about a week to create a singe garment. Also it said that the lwarence is her age and in the flashback he was her only attendant, are they not worried about her safety so much that they allow a mere child to be her guard? Although there are these little details I still enjoyed it and the way you showed the way she learned a lesson on hard work was creative. It was a fun read but when you see such mistakes as tiny as they might be it is still a little annoying.