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Comments of chapter undefined of Reborn Into Harry Potter As A High Warlock

Hollow_Loki27
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I see well if that's true then ill go over it and change it up a bit to make it better! thanks for your thoughts and opinions!

JCMyers
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I hope he is learning oclumency, he needs to protect his knowledge.

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Cujo
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I like the concept of being a higher being and all, but him having basic control over all elements even time and space at such a young age, is a bit overpowered, also the fact that the man he was adopted by just so happens to be rich and from a long lineage of pureblood families is really unrealistic. This kinda makes the story less interesting since there's no experience of troubles that help shape the MC.

Hollow_Loki27
Hollow_Loki27AuthorHollow_Loki27

Hey everyone I want to say thanks for reading this even if its not good. I also haven't watched the harry potter series since last year so im kinda rusty on some spots. So if i forget anything please tell me so i can fix it, oh and if you see and mistakes or spelling error please tell me where and what chapter its on. I dont have anyone to go over it so Ill be relying on you guys :)