Hollow_Loki27
I like the concept of being a higher being and all, but him having basic control over all elements even time and space at such a young age, is a bit overpowered, also the fact that the man he was adopted by just so happens to be rich and from a long lineage of pureblood families is really unrealistic. This kinda makes the story less interesting since there's no experience of troubles that help shape the MC.
Hey everyone I want to say thanks for reading this even if its not good. I also haven't watched the harry potter series since last year so im kinda rusty on some spots. So if i forget anything please tell me so i can fix it, oh and if you see and mistakes or spelling error please tell me where and what chapter its on. I dont have anyone to go over it so Ill be relying on you guys :)