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Comments of chapter undefined of Lion's Sin Of Pride(MHA)

TheRockLee
TheRockLeeLv4TheRockLee

Uh, where exactly IS the story?

LovableBerry
LovableBerryAuthorLovableBerry

no problem, ill notify when its out

TheRockLee:Okay thanks for clarifying that. I was worried this was being dropped before the first chapter. I really like the character concept. Again, thanks for clarifying .
Kuraisuto
KuraisutoLv6Kuraisuto

change his name to japanese and make escanor his hero name

Archonstine
ArchonstineLv5Archonstine

Dude, I am fine with what you are doing, just please don't make it a harem story like all the others you have written.

TheRockLee
TheRockLeeLv4TheRockLee

Just realized, he'd be like Fumikage's opposite. Fumikafe gets stronger at night (at least his quirk does) and Escanor gets more powerful during the day. Neat.

DarthVegito
DarthVegitoLv10DarthVegito

Story was fine just if you make a new one with escanor abilities have it be him only using those powers dont add other anime abilites or attacks because thej its not escanor anymore its just some multi-anime escanor which would be dumb. he can be two different heroes with him being like a batman at night with martial arts and gadgets but he would be max human strength then during the day hes the lion sin of pride with Sunshine OR yiu can just have teo different “quirks” that one is powered by the sun like sunshine then you can make something thats original but the polar opposite of sunshine like he gets this ability when the moon is out(can have it so when its a new Moon hes practically a strong trained quirkless person or when the sun goes down he gets the ability to use his other quirk..... if you go harem then idc what girls you choose but if you choose a girl choose someone that compliments him not just someone that people want or whatever because they usually are all the same few girls everytime

MkGod
MkGodLv14MkGod

I hope you do a weak to strong this time and not have him sh*t on everybody off rip

Smithsonian86_
Smithsonian86_Lv5Smithsonian86_

Thank you!!!! I think he shouLdnt have rita but instead mei makes it for him When she learns about his the one problems Also how about using fire dragon slayer figHting style cause he can blast fire anywHere On his body Lastly you could have him make fire forCe and giVe bAkugo the Idea to use his feet cause some MHA characters forget they have legs

Master_Livythan
Master_LivythanLv3Master_Livythan

why you gonna play with my feelings like that

umairkta_4486
umairkta_4486Lv4umairkta_4486

How much longer do we have to wait pla us an estimate

TheFalling
TheFallingLv4TheFalling

Reeeeeee

leviathan_2nd
leviathan_2ndLv13leviathan_2nd

mmm there is a hole at last chapter if not wrong. battle of killwhateveritis happen on night right? arent mc get debuff when night?

TintedvCeo
TintedvCeoLv5TintedvCeo

yay

Glitch
GlitchLv13Glitch

Ah, yes. A man of culture I see. (Escanor vs Allmight rap battle by Rustage and Daddyphatsnaps)

NoiizFPS
NoiizFPSLv6NoiizFPS

i have suggestion its up to u whether u do it or not but make sure that although his character is similar to escanor give him some original line that the real one didnt say

Carrotwarrior
CarrotwarriorLv4Carrotwarrior

:(

Hollysummoapocaly
HollysummoapocalyLv5Hollysummoapocaly

El revelar a los demĂĄs que el meteorito era una ilucion

Darkcurry23
Darkcurry23Lv4Darkcurry23

And here we were wondering if the mighty lion had finally been put down

TheSeaFlipDownward
TheSeaFlipDownwardLv6TheSeaFlipDownward

Alright

Bad_dreams24
Bad_dreams24Lv2Bad_dreams24

NOOOOOO I WAS IN THE MIDDLE OF A CHAPTER😭😭😭😭😭

Eroboy
EroboyLv4Eroboy

Author is the pride of your Mc be like Gilgamesh pride