Comments of chapter undefined of My Space-Time System

Nice chapter, my only gripes is the 20th ranked somehow became the 14th rank and Castiel feeling guilty about not telling his other element is strange. The way you had him at the beginning made me assume he was going to become this antagonistic dude to Blake but so far the guy is actually kinda...okay. Really stands out as the dark horse of the novel though. and not because he has the darkness element.

Another one 🤗🤗 Amazing - just woke up to this!!