Heather_ANARE
I like the story I just wish that he was stuck in the mountain for a year or so, doing that would emphasise the coming home scene, and make the family more connected to the reader. And could describe the woods more making them seem more dangerous beacuse despite the fact that everyone says there hard to survuve in we never get to see that. Mabye add some dangerous magical beasts? Other than that I liked the story a lot.