Comments of chapter undefined of Transmigrated in Tales of Demons and Gods [Completed]

feels strange taking an authors virginity, i hope i didn't hurt him to much. meh i give him a few stones and all is well

way too much chapters abour his clones after you implemented them in the story. most of the chapters in the 2nd half also had close to zero conversation and were only told in 3rd person. should fix those 2 points in your next novel.

in ur next fan-fic keep the mc unique and keep it to 1 mc, these clone life chapters made this so much harder to read and where way too annoying. add clones that the mc has created but dont do it like how u done in this where they go off getting their own woman and stuff, that was so annoying and then the clone life fillers happened and it just ruined the story, i like the beginning very much and congratulate you very much, but i do hope you take the advice of avoiding clone life chapters or any thing similar and adding too many mc's since although they where clones they got way too much attention and then basically became mc's. we was no longer unique

only regret you dont make him a father

the fanfic wasn't that bad. It was funny and entertaining sure some things didn't add up but in the end everthing made sense (chough)

I actually liked the clone life chapters, feels slice of life

Estuvo muy bueno leerlo. No siempre se tienen las historias terminadas y te dejan colgado al dejar de escribir o limitarse a no ser oriinal

[img=recommend]loved it, great and Expect the next fanfic to even more amazing

thank you for your hard work and i can't wait to see the next one

Thank you for great creation and entertaiment. its pleasure to read your next story / fanfic.

Hehehe okay we will take the responsibility but you must create your next one fast

i surprise you finish this novel! i drop it after the clones came in the story but still not many authors finish their novel so praise to you man!

Thanks for the story and I hope you write some more later

congrats on finishing a book, time to do another one (jk)

will you wrote another story?

thanks for the hard work

thanks for the hard work author-san, i as a reader really liked it. thanks for the work !!

thanks for the story .😁👋👋👋. hope to read something your again soon. 😁

Thanks for a good Book. Good luck on your next book. I do agree need more interactions. It was more like reading a synopsis of what happened then reading a story. Not that is a bad thing, just needs moderation. But lets hope for a Naruto or Harry Potter fan fic next with great kingdom building. Both canon suck with how the world doesn't change or in Naruto's world it goes all happy for no good reason.