Comments of chapter undefined of Transmigrated in Tales of Demons and Gods [Completed]
Transmigrated in Tales of Demons and Gods [Completed]
Wise_Snail
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thanks for the chapter. I think you should not clone himself. he just needs ask permission to both of girls, if he can add another girl. if you clone himself to court another, it seems he is just cheating to the girls. also when he is clone himself in Nei Li body? I thought you just erease and copy Nei Li memory
Author I really think you need to revise this clone thing. If they do not share memories or a regular basis or constantly connected they may have the same base memories but once they diverge there are different people. Having a soul seal on the clone means nothing, its a flimsy plot armor, that clone has all his memories and should be able to deal with it at some point. Can you imagine waking up finding you are a clone of yourself and the original basically expect you to be his slave, to a degree? You will rebel, even if it pushes both of you to death. DO not build this novel further on this flawed plot, it will just make everything else worse. If you intend it as a lesson to him because he was stupid doing this that is fine but not as everything will be dandy and no issues because that is extreme plot armor.
For a while I was confused, and I definitely missed it before, but Nie Li is Xiao Yan's clone? So what, he removed the older Nie Li, consumed his memories, and made a clone to inhabit Nie Li's body? Also, when he talks about making more clones to do other things and court other girls, will those clones have identities of other people? Or will a couple Xiao Yan's be running around? Cause that's stupid. Well, the whole concept with new clones is weird. MC either only has two wives, or a regular harem. He promised them he'll only ever be with the two of them, so he forms a couple clones to go around that?
I can get behind clones like shadow clone even if more semi permanent but in its current iteration it will irritate me when I ever read this, unlikely to keep going. Sad. Didn't even read this chapter. I just noticed there are advanced chapters already so this is unlikely to change, another one bites the dust, probably.
Dont see the point of the whole clone thing other than making it look like he stayed faithful to the other two when in reality he didnt since he is telling the clones to go after certain women. What's worse is he wont he even touch them but his clones will lol. Keep up the good work other than the clone thing the story is great.
