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Comments of chapter undefined of Records of Rebirth

BlackStarMage
BlackStarMageLv5BlackStarMage

Have to admit, skipped pretty much everything up to this point. I really dislike this prologue for some reason, don't even really have any reasons for it, it kind of a 'just cuz' scenario.

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Jaricvenn
JaricvennLv3Jaricvenn

Really enjoyed the backstory arc. She said it herself, only cared for siblings, so guess there was truth in the others character assassination.... Knife-kun was scarey..

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Dubstheduke
DubsthedukeLv2Dubstheduke

Man this teacher is younger than me

FLORA_HENRY
FLORA_HENRYLv13FLORA_HENRY

Oh my gosh the backstory made me so sad but also annoyed like i understand youre shocked but COME ON!! YOUR TEACHER WAS JUST STABBED TO DEATH AT LEAST AVENGE HIM HIT THE MURDERER WITH A CHAIR OH MY GOD...lovely work author i enjoy itđŸ„°

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Gary_Vanross
Gary_VanrossLv13Gary_Vanross

not gona lie i find it interesting then she thinks of there comments as untrue seeing as that pretty much what all of them probably think as well, and with such a holy'er then tho personally I can see why they disliked her so much. now as far as the story itself goes I like your set up I personally hate the devour type system it doesn't really give the system holder much option in the evolution path other then just use other creatures powers instead of having her own but ill give it a shot since you seem like a good writer

Iluvyuri_444
Iluvyuri_444Lv3Iluvyuri_444

It's one of the tensura plot

kelijahf
kelijahfLv13kelijahf

Well the description mentioned multiple protagonists down the line. I thought they would be the others who were killed but with that last sentence maybe not.

Zackary_Zhangcheng
Zackary_ZhangchengLv1Zackary_Zhangcheng

Excellent backstory arc. The fact that you didn't reveal the nature of her death, but instead fed it to readers piece by piece, was a great storytelling trchnique. This chapter in particular had vibes similar to that of an Isekai anime.

NightOps
NightOpsLv5NightOps

That was a lot of unnecessary backstory padding. Could have made it much less detailed.