EternalNightLotus
not gona lie i find it interesting then she thinks of there comments as untrue seeing as that pretty much what all of them probably think as well, and with such a holy'er then tho personally I can see why they disliked her so much. now as far as the story itself goes I like your set up I personally hate the devour type system it doesn't really give the system holder much option in the evolution path other then just use other creatures powers instead of having her own but ill give it a shot since you seem like a good writer