Comments of chapter undefined of Records of Rebirth

Eternal Night Lotus, I enjoyed the way you described the MC's feelings when trying to find out what had happened to her.

a lot of expression, little activity, emotions and dialogues.

Oh wow the prologue still hasn't ended. I understand wanting to flesh out the background, but you're disobeying the first rule of storytelling here. Show, don't tell. There's no show and endless amounts of exposition instead. I really want to read this story though, so I'll continue further

f*** when will it end, I just wanna read a rebirth novel and it's being mired in a prologue that refuses to whimper and die. The worst part is that I'm pretty sure this won't be the first flashback and I don't think I can make it through another sketch like this, her having little to no memories, being told she has nothing the grasp except her own thoughts, blurred memories that begin to unveil themselves isn't just a bad start but not something that NEEDS to span 5+ chaps. Idek if its 5 plus cuz u don't wanna enter the 5th chapter.... ughhh kms

Wait what happened to her siblings?

This prologue is uselessly long

wow im keeping this book in my library forever!! its so good