Comments of chapter undefined of Death... and me

I really appreciate that you can write reasonably competent people in places of influence, rather than the usual fair of stupid +/or conniving self-centered trash that we so often get.

Can we EVER have a normal book with a normal story instead of some ****tard CLICHE AF plot progressions? Bruv

I don’t see any wrong with the pace or direction this is going, it’s actually more exciting, than to have everything act out like normal and boring. A little conflict or mystery is neded for a story to move forwards.

wherever there are humans there will be jealousy... be it a web novel or real society....

bravo bravo good story

hmm, I coined the catchphrase hail the rainbow for Krune, what should I do for these two? maybe hail the twilight? no, that makes them sound like vampires. hail the dawn? hm. this requires more thought.

the author is the type of person thats wants stones thrown at him/her but only if there power stones

thanks for the chapter

😍😍😍😍😍

sigh.. here we go.. cliche

xp

nice to see agoid tribe leader.

You did a great job on this.😊

tribe wipe inc?

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Thanks for thy chapter!

I will be silent