Comments of chapter undefined of Death... and me

I'm glad I gave this a shot. This had a good premise, and hooked me on this chapter. That's a sign of good things (or my poor taste). Lets see how this pans out.

and the lolz continue

The last paragraph was so funny

I can imagine them being birthed while fighting eachother

Rean and Death are hilarious

"Fiver years" This chapter needs a good edit.

It would have been nice if Death become Rean sister instead, as Death dont have a gender to begin with

Ho..ho! 😏😌😏 I wonder if they will look identical to each other, since they are twins.

Vaaaaa vaaaaa va

technically death should be a virgin too, unless he has a thing for dead thoughtless people

Aside from a bit of weird phrasing and story telling, this is pretty good!

good start, i like this very much

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And more errors: "Fiver years" -> Five years

Hey, I spotted an error. You first tell us Harmilia is doing miscellaneous jobs around the village and the next paragraph you tell us she is working in the mine. Please fix that. Love your work :)

nice

It's my first time reading a reincarnation novel that the reincarnated(s) story started on the mother's wombbbbb

I like the humor!

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