I like the story but the end of the battle and going back to the palace is kind of too condensed. There is no nice flow to connecting the 2 parts of the story coming fro the battle and going to the palace.
I still enjoy the style and the story very much.
I didn't want to wake up. I was having a much better time asleep. And that's really sad. It was almost like a reverse nightmare, like when you wake up from a nightmare you're so relieved. I woke up into a nightmare.
Ned Vizzini, It's Kind of a Funny Story