Hi, I'm Victoria, an editor from Dreame. After viewing all your works, we would like to give you an offer: to be our full-time writer. If you have an interest, pls contact victoriayu.stary@gmail.com.
Victoria
Author I like your writing style! It is very present, as the action seems to flow in real time. I feel like I am in man's mind. Excuse while I drink my estrogen pills before I start growing hair! Ahaha! I look forward to reading more.[img=update]
Ok this character is supposedly 1000 years old but inner monologue is like and irreverant ****. I just feel actions,thought process etc should be more mature.
for me at the beginning Alanis seemed rather a "nice" guy - and I'm sure he is - but apparently he is very strong, can defend himself and doesn't mind a fight. i like it :-) and I'm sure I'm going to like Alanis & Beau together