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Comments of chapter undefined of Shadow Emperor in Another World

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bongosandpizza
bongosandpizzaLv3bongosandpizza

You are actually really good at writing fight scenes! One of the qualities of a good fight scene, is minimal decription, which you do perfectly. For all those who do not understand I will explain; a poorly written fight scene tries to explain every detail and not allow the readers mind to work. A good fight scene lets the readers mind fill in the gaps. Keep up the great work Author-sama, and have a nice day!

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Grimlock1604
Grimlock1604Lv4Grimlock1604

Gonna be honest I forgot about the vine raptor but remembered when you wrote about the way she came out. They are just DOOMED.

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Dragon_above_all
Dragon_above_allLv4Dragon_above_all

The fight is great. I personally don't have any criticism. Question is the self insert author omnipotent?