Comments of chapter undefined of Shadow Emperor in Another World

I binged everything and all I can say was that I was thoroughly confused from start to finish but still entertained. Which I guess is the whole point of a novel... Either way I'll just go over alot of the more 'meh' issues I had; - I don't exactly understand why he continues to gain new abilities without actually putting any effort in. Just reading the descriptions of his skills aswell as the POV of bystandards or family that interact with him its pretty safe to say that he's already the strongest being on the planet if not then atleast top 10 with the potential to reach #1, even with just his starting abilities a few of which he hasn't even bothered to use he could probably still kill just about anyone who looks at him the wrong way. Point is it's going to be really hard to make any exceptional fight scenes or even a mildly tense situation where the mc couldn't just snap his fingers and win. - I know its probably just inexperience in writing and can be explained away as the Dad and Mom probably living a long time but their accepting of him basically keeping all of his secrets close to his chest is a bit absurd. Especially when you consider him springing his transformation on them like he knew it was coming, realistically people just aren't this trusting, same for the children. I don't understand the concept of just dropping a new sibling in a family and their not being any changes to the family dynamic especially when upon rereading the story it hasn't exactly even been a month. Even the youngest (8 years old) would put up some resistance, this lack of deeper than surface level thought oriented characters means that when any of them get hurt/blackmailed/go missing or die there won't really be any emotion. This needs to be seriously addressed if your planning on jumping straight into romance as theirs so many facets to a relationship that need to be addressed otherwise whats the point of even addressing that their dating or in love if you can't describe it? I'm speaking from experiance because my mother chose to adopt while me and my younger brother were still in highschool, you need to actually make some conflict otherwise the whole family dynamic comes off as unrealistic. - The setting is confusing, is he in the middle ages or the future, why is Christmas a holiday they celebrate, does that mean Christianity exists on that world? They have cars, working bathrooms, pocket dimensions and spells that show the inner workings of the human body. Where are the computers?, not alot of people understand the complexity that goes into making a modern car but what im getting at is if they can programm via enchantments how that vehicle is supposed to operate aswell as an onboard navigation then they can make a goddamn computer atleast an elementary one. - The races are confusing, if orcs, slimes, elves etc... don't exactly have any inherent qualities that make them like rpg mobs then the worlds alot less 'magical' and more prejudiced, humans by nature are some of the most racist creatures on the planet mostly because of our underwhelming acceptance of the unknown and the intellectual superiority that we have over a large number of species, if that intellectual gap isn't present in this world then I am again confused on why humans aren't extinct, or hunted by other races though MC hasn't exactly explored the world at all not much to say on world history here. There should be some semblance of war against other races because thats just how humanity works, elves are beautiful and live longer, orcs are physically stronger, dragons have tough scales and wings etc... All of which humans inherantly lack, a thing they do have though is greed the whole point of a fantasy setting is to introduce concepts that interact with the world and produces interesting and unique situations, not completely flip world views. I don't have a mottled view of humanity this is just how in writing and realistically humans would appreach other species, with gree

Define toy too force and he is just ten body wise no matter how mature or mentally older he is how will the others react.

I feel like this was too forced. I mean they just met.

op slime shape shifting slime ... reminds me of an anime that time i got reincarnated as a slime

when I am with my best friend (we are both girls) we are pretty chill most of the time, sometimes we get touchy feely like "isnt it amazing we've been friends for so long?" and we reminisce about old times. other times we rant about things that annoy us, for instance when your boyfriend keeps making the same small niggling mistake, anyone listening in thinks you are being too harsh which is why you need your girl friends to stop you from going insane, for example "he always leaves the fucking cheese out! how hard is it to put the cheese back in the freaking fridge!? and on the rare occasion that he does he doesnt even wrap it properly and it goes all gross and I have to throw it away! do you have any idea how much cheese I've had to buy this last week because he keeps spoiling it!? my god! I cant take it anymore!" and they will go: "I know babe that fucking sucks, he's been doing this for years, you know you can always come round here if you need some space" and then you say (whilst practically sobbing) "thanks babe it's okay I just needed to let it out, you're the best, Im sick of having to be an arsehole in an attempt to get him to listen" and then you both sigh deeply pat each other on the shoulder and shake your heads.

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Girls and lady's are all complicated mess. Everyone is different. No one girl flirts or like being flirted the same ways as another. At least, that's I how see. Its no different to how we flirt with others. Some like a little joke and others are sensual. But everyone does the fake smile on first date. Again, just my opinion as a lady. Loving the story so far. I not fussed about making things realistic or correcting mannerisms. I like the Cliché stuff.

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁👍

Thanks for the chapter