ForeignSign
Just started reading this last night, fell asleep reading this, woke up and after everything else that is needed am back to reading this novel. You're quite the author, haven't been this impressed by reading a novel in a few years. Also learned I have a type... This slice of life novel has been entertaining. Since I don't know anything about idol's beyond one documentary film on Blackpink, I'm going into your world blind. I love the fact that you credit the actual music to whomever did it in RL. Before Coachella I didn't know who BlackPink was as I'm more of a Hip Hop/Jazz/Blues/Reggae/Roots and R'n'B fan. So everytime you credit who's music you used I'd look up the song from YouTube. I love that you're actually expanding my musical horizons. All the negative stuff was said before. You've got yourself a fan and will be adding this to my library. As long as you keep writing I'll be reading as for sometimes forgetting wherein I left off in your story I'll just reread a few chapters and eventually find what doesn't look familiar. Thanks for the story so far and for the chapter!
The chapter isn't confusing because of the part about the past (I think it's actually quite clear), however you change the name of the characters too many times (Anna become Kanna, Ma-Ri is changed to Mi-Ra then to Mira), stick to one name only. Ps: tone down the exposition, the last paragraph is not natural at all.